Dan Romascanu
2016-12-11 11:21:25 UTC
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Nits
Summary: Ready, with nits
I am not an expert in this field, but the document seems to meet its
goals, it's clear and precise
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 4: s/Section5.1.7/Sections 5.1.7/
2. Section 8: 'The following entry has been added to
the registry' - I may be wrong, but the section seems to define two
new entries in the registry rather than one
Review result: Ready with Nits
Summary: Ready, with nits
I am not an expert in this field, but the document seems to meet its
goals, it's clear and precise
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 4: s/Section5.1.7/Sections 5.1.7/
2. Section 8: 'The following entry has been added to
the registry' - I may be wrong, but the section seems to define two
new entries in the registry rather than one