Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt-rp-namespace-03

[Fernando Gont]

Reviewer: Fernando Gont
Review result: Ready with Nits

** Technical **

Intended algorithm for mcpttq is queuing.
New Warning code: No.
New SIP response code: No.

Is this kind of thing really needed/required in the registry?



** Editorial **

The third generation partnership project (3GPP)

May be you should capitalize these? (i.e., "Third Generation...")

In addition to this a commercial PTT
service for non-professional use (e.g., groups of people on

holiday)

Please insert a comma after "this".

MCPTT data transfer currently under development can
benefit from a queueing mechanism.

"data transfer..." protocols?

The use of this namespace outside such network is
undefined.

s/network/networks/

5. IANA Considerations
Abiding by the rules established within [RFC4412] and [RFC7134],

this

is an Informative RFC registering two new namespaces, their
associated priority-values, and intended algorithms.

s/registering/creating/ ?

[Fernando Gont]

Folks,

Apologies: wasn't sure whether the tool would insert the "boilerplate",
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Post by Fernando Gont
Reviewer: Fernando Gont
Review result: Ready with Nits
** Technical **

Intended algorithm for mcpttq is queuing.
New Warning cde: No.
New SIP response code: No.

Is this kind of thing really needed/required in the registry?
** Editorial **

The third generation partnership project (3GPP)

May be you should capitalize these? (i.e., "Third Generation...")

In addition to this a commercial PTT
service for non-professional use (e.g., groups of people on

holiday)
Please insert a comma after "this".

MCPTT data transfer currently under development can
benefit from a queueing mechanism.

"data transfer..." protocols?

The use of this namespace outside such network is
undefined.

s/network/networks/

5. IANA Considerations
Abiding by the rules established within [RFC4412] and [RFC7134],

this

is an Informative RFC registering two new namespaces, their
associated priority-values, and intended algorithms.

s/registering/creating/ ?
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